The world is so full of a number of things, I’m sure we should all be as happy as kings. -- Robert Louis Stevenson

Monday, 21 September 2009

If Auden were on a message board, he'd be thrown off

I'd been warned that my copy of Auden's Collected Poems contained only his final revisions, and that these were sometimes inferior to the original published versions. But I didn't realise the full effect of this until today, when I came to my favourite poem of his, "In Memory of W.B. Yeats". Or, at least, some version of it is my favourite. The version in this volume leaves out some of the lines I love best:


Time that is intolerant
of the brave and innocent,
And indifferent in a week
To a beautiful physique,

Worships language and forgives
Everyone by whom it lives;
Pardons cowardice, conceit,
Lays its honours at their feet.

Time that with this strange excuse
Pardoned Kipling and his views,
And will pardon Paul Claudel,
Pardons him for writing well.


This doesn't entirely ruin the poem -- Part I remains astonishing, as do some of the surviving stanzas from Part III ("Intellectual disgrace/Stares from every human face/And the seas of pity lie/Locked and frozen in each eye"). But I do wonder if it would have become one of my favourites if I'd read this version first. And it also makes me wonder what I might be missing as I read poems less familiar to me.

Revising a poem that's already been published has always struck me as pointless and unfair. It reminds me a bit of the habit some bloggers and message board users have of going back and substantially editing old posts, thus rendering absurd or irrelevant any responses they've received in the meantime. So annoying is this practice that the administrators of some message boards disable editing or block members who abuse it.

I'm told there's no collection that includes both Auden's originals and his revised versions. Perhaps we'll have to wait till his work goes out of copyright.

2 comments:

Nick said...

It would have been more tolerable if Auden's revisions improved his poems, which they rarely do, or if the had revised them purely for aesthetic reasons.

Joe said...

That's my favorite Auden poem as well, and I agree that those are some of the best lines - I've never heard a compelling justification of their removal.